Personal Essay

I liked a lot of things about my personal essay. It was really easy for me to write because the situation happened over my senior year so all the details were fresh in my head. Also, I liked it because it was easy to get four pages. I felt like I had done a good job. What I didn't like was that I felt like because of the limit in pages, I couldn't give enough detail about the essay and everything that happened to me. I feel like if I was able to add that to my paper it would flow a bit better and also it would help my point.